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About Me Digital Art / Hobbyist Member Melanie JoyFemale/United States Groups group avatar #Just-Imagine-It
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Keep Me Hanging On

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This is what happens when I'm bored and my camera has charged batteries... :shrug:
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Come Home The overwhelming solitary silence.
The absence of my perfect long-time friend.
The too-loud echoes of our verbal violence.
The realization of the all-too-sudden end.

The absence of my perfect long-time friend.
The fact that I can't force myself to laugh.
The realization of the all-too-sudden end.
The stupefying urge to bring you back.

The fact that I can't force myself to laugh.
My friends are keeping me awake by force.
The stupefying urge to bring you back
is jostling my train of thought off course.

My friends are keeping me awake by force.
I cannot seem to struggle on alone.
What's jostling my train of thought off course
ar
Come Home
by ~rime-n-rezon

This is beyond your norm and for that alone I rated high for technique. The pantoum is a challenging style and you nailed it. Originali...

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Hindrance Where compassion once stood is now ignorance.
Your overly obnoxious tendencies
I bear witness to until they
break the boundaries I had so carefully leveled.
My emotions come surging forward into my head
instead of occupying the designated,
organized space I'd had them in
before the dams broke.
Unable to control myself,
I push you away,
further confirming your previous suspicions
of my ever-growing intolerance.
I'm tired of you.
Your consuming, obsessive need
to stay by my side is unbearable.
It's not that I don't like you,
I don't think I could stop myself from liking you.
It's just that maybe I need a little time to
Hindrance
by ~rime-n-rezon

I know I'm biased but in complete and total objectivity I would rate this as high as I did no matter who wrote it. It has such an impac...

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fine ideas
by =ySky

This is such a contradiction! This covers all the bases: It has Vision: The visual is soft, sensual, almost romantic. It caught my a...

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FUTURES
by *Goodfoot42

The depth perception on this is remarkable! It brings to mind something I'd see through a View Finder, or the eyes of a predator. ...

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Belated Thank You

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I wanted to take a minute to thank everyone who sent a birthday wish my way.  I am only just now getting the messages as I haven't been on here in, well, a very long time. :blush:

I still don't have anything to create graphics with and it makes me sad to see so much new and awesome artwork and I can't contribute.  That's no excuse to abandon my friends though and for that I am sorry. Please forgive me? :heart:

TTFN....
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  • Mood: dA Love
  • Listening to: the dog snore
  • Reading: the blank pages in my journal
  • Watching: my creativty die... *sigh*
  • Playing: Words With Friends on FB
  • Drinking: tea... of course. :)
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Melanie Joy
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Current Residence: Tennessee
Favorite genre of music: Whatever moves me.
Favorite photographer: I don't play favorites.
Personal Quote: If you always do what you've always done, you'll always get what you've always got
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=CSnyder Feb 20, 2012
:hug:
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~meljoy68 Feb 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:kiss:

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"Music rots when it gets too far from the dance. Poetry atrophies when it gets too far from music."

~Ezra Pound
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~duggiehoo Jan 11, 2012
:party:Happy Birthday!:iconcookiecakeplz: if ya pass by.
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~meljoy68 Feb 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm so not worthy!! Thank you for the birthday wish, I love it very much!

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"Music rots when it gets too far from the dance. Poetry atrophies when it gets too far from music."

~Ezra Pound
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~Destroyer77 Jan 11, 2012
Bappy H-Day! :iconcake3dplz:

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~meljoy68 Feb 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:laughing: Love that, thank you!!

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"Music rots when it gets too far from the dance. Poetry atrophies when it gets too far from music."

~Ezra Pound
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~Destroyer77 Feb 16, 2012
You're welcome :)

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*BigMac1212 Jan 11, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Happy birthday! :cake:

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19 As many as I love, I rebuke and chasten: be zealous therefore, and repent.
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~meljoy68 Feb 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you very much!

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"Music rots when it gets too far from the dance. Poetry atrophies when it gets too far from music."

~Ezra Pound
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*fashioneyes Jan 11, 2012
Happy Birthday my friend.:sun:
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~meljoy68 Feb 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you, friend. I'm slow in responding, my apologies!

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"Music rots when it gets too far from the dance. Poetry atrophies when it gets too far from music."

~Ezra Pound
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*fashioneyes Feb 15, 2012
You're welcome, it's ok, i am slow too.:)
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*Valedhelven Jan 11, 2012
Happiest of birthdays, Mel!! :party: :cake:

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~meljoy68 Feb 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much. I'm only a month late in replying. :facepalm:

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"Music rots when it gets too far from the dance. Poetry atrophies when it gets too far from music."

~Ezra Pound
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`creativemikey Jun 16, 2011
Hi Melanie,
Come look at,
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:peace:on earth to all!

If you :love:me like:music:, I'll be your song :heart:

"The aim of art is to represent not the outward appearance of things, but their inward significance".~Aristotle~
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