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Breaking Rhythm

A teasing bit of iamb sets the style,
enticing in simplistic words. Your pure
and unadulterated page endures
no verbage on the cotton. To defile
such innocence with average words is vile,
yet whispers come to sway the insecure.
Sophisticated confidence allures,
premeditated flattery beguiles…
You listen and obey…chaos ensues.
Attempts to tame the cadenced lines fall short,
until a valiant battle with your muse
allows you to victoriously thwart
the silent struggle with an inky bruise:
Pentameter parameters abort.




This is my entry in the Magical Muse Contest, hosted by :iconscarlettletters:.


Stock credit:
:iconleandrasstock: for the Ink background

Text background is mine, as is the text itself. :aww:


font used is 'scrawny kid' .

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:iconcsnyder:
really nice hun, best of luck my friend:hug:
:iconsilentplea:
Awesome Mel :clap:
good luck!!!

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~Shelley

What lies behind us
And what lies before us
Are small matters compared to
what lies within us

~Ralph Waldo Emerson~
:iconaussiesteve1961:
best of luck in the contest Mel

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:iconnetta43:
Very nice Melanie! :clap:
Best of luck in the contest. :hug:

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"The most authentic thing about us is our capacity to create, to overcome, to endure, to transform, to love and to be greater than our suffering." - Ben Okri



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:iconmeljoy68:
Thanks, Chris. :aww:

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"Music rots when it gets too far from the dance. Poetry atrophies when it gets too far from music."

~Ezra Pound
:iconmeljoy68:
Thank you very much, Lennette! :D

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"Music rots when it gets too far from the dance. Poetry atrophies when it gets too far from music."

~Ezra Pound
:iconmeljoy68:
Thank you very much, Steve. :aww:

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"Music rots when it gets too far from the dance. Poetry atrophies when it gets too far from music."

~Ezra Pound
:iconmeljoy68:
Thank you very much, Shelley! I can use all the luck I can get. :aww:

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"Music rots when it gets too far from the dance. Poetry atrophies when it gets too far from music."

~Ezra Pound
:iconnetta43:
You're welcome :blowkiss:

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"The most authentic thing about us is our capacity to create, to overcome, to endure, to transform, to love and to be greater than our suffering." - Ben Okri



Visit my :gallery: [link]

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